This is my very first submission and I welcome positive/constructive critiques. I am trying to improve my writing and hope you enjoy the story. * "Are you sure you want to do this?" The car idled in the parking space of Avalon Apartments. The lights of the parking lot combined with the faint light from the dashboard served to illuminate the two young women...
[Please note that this is a completely fictional story. It has been written as a erotic story and is not relevant to real life. All picture links in no way depicts an actual person and serve only to have an estimate representation of the characters in the story.] ‘White’ was the first thing Alan noted, it was so bright it was all that could be seen. “Hello A...
29 June Mike My hotel room smelled like crap, I smelled like crap, and unsurprisingly I looked like crap. Oh, and I felt like crap. Come to think of it, crap pretty much described my whole life right at the moment. I mean, what sort of fucking moron gets ripped off by a prostitute? And how in the hell was I going to tell Deb? During my emotional wallow I t...
Peggy told us this one evening after a very pleasant afternoon on Weymouth Sea front we had danced along, arm in arm, eight of us, like a bunch of hooligans, with the usual 'kiss me quick' hats, sticks of candy floss and a few games of bingo under our pinnies. Jenny had won twenty quid and we rounded it off with a gorgeous fish supper there on the quay side,...
'Name's Ted, but because I am a Scouser down in London, you have guessed it, my followers call me Scouse. A plumber on building sites. The same followers say that I am built like a shithouse door! With the 'Vacant' notice written on my forehead. really I'm six feet tall with a broad hairy chest, hair which I had transferred from my head downwards. Yes, Madam...
The next morning I was awoken by a loud banging on the front door. "Alright I'm coming, I'm coming," I called groggily before stomping down the hallway. The smell of freshly brewed coffee hit me in the face and I was tempted to ignore whoever it was that was so rudely banging on my door. But instead, I fumbled with the lock on the door and finally got it...
Hi all, The Empty Chair is a story about what happens to a relationship after a dramatic disclosure. It has been written in three parts and I'll apologise now for those who will later comment about my grammatical issues. As before, I welcome and look forward to your thoughts. ***** The hospital room was not quite dark, for a lonely streak of light intrud...
Since about the beginning of high school, Mike and I have been best friends. We used to get together a lot, but between work and going to college we only see each other maybe once every two weeks. A couple of months ago I got a call from him asking me if he could come over right away. From the distress in his voice I could tell this wasn't just a routine vis...
Wrong Aim - Episode One Detailed Report Number 1 On Frances of Venus When we open a beautiful woman is at the controls of small spacecraft and looking seriously at a picture of Commander Riker. It was the night shift on the Enterprise. "Enterprise this is Nefti calling Commander Riker." A surprised Riker answered with raised eyebrow. "Open channel, on s...
Hi everyone, I just wanted to thank all of the people who have sent me suggestions and comments. It lead to a major revision. Unfortunately if you've been following along from the beginning you'll find that the chapters posted prior to this one do not contain the revision. But that's the way it goes when I post the first drafts as I go along. I can tell you...