I confess it freely and deny it not--I am a quibbler, and I love to quibble. That's copy editing. I say I won't mess around with plot, character or continuity. Those are the provinces of the author. I do the mechanicals--spelling, grammar, syntax, sentence structure. They are the off-putting little details that distract the reader, when the reader should b...
After checking his watch, Lucas called from the back of the car that was ferrying him from the airport to his hotel. After several rings, the voice he longed to hear answered the phone. "Hi you!" "Hey, beautiful!" "This is a pleasant surprise. I thought I wouldn't hear from you until you were back on the East Coast." "Not only am I back East, I just fle...
[18:55] NemikShCoG has entered the room. [18:56] TehyaSH: Hey I didn't feel like sitting in there [18:56] TehyaSH: specially when I got a slave the needs to work [18:56] *NemikShCoG strolls into the main hall from My chambers* [18:56] NemikShCoG: yes, I opened this up for a while, but no-one came [18:56] pepperTPS has entered the room. [18:57] TehyaS...
Wei Li shoved eighteen-year old Chang Zhuo. Chang's back met the apartment complex's wall. Wei gripped Chang's throat with his bruised right hand. He said, "Thought I forgot where you lived all these years? That motherfucker friend of yours isn't here to protect you now, is he?" Chang scowled. But he did not have the courage to spit on Wei's face. Befo...
Kim öppnade sina ögon, och såg sig om. Rummet hade vita väggar. Det stod några apparater med siffror och kurvor på båda sidor om sängen. Kim visste inte vad som hänt. En medelålders man stod bredvid sängen. Han bar en vit rock, och lyste in i Kims ögon med en ficklampa. "Vad bra du har vaknat", sa mannen, "Jag är doktor Nilsson. Vet du vad som...
du heter martin och sitter vid ditt skriv bordet och ser ut igenom ditt fönster. när du ser att dörren öppnas och stängs du hör röster små prata med varandra. du vet att det är din barnvakt som har kommit eftersom din mamma och pappa ska ut med din pappas it företag på middag och hel helg. du reser på dig och går ut från ditt rum och går ner till botten vån...
A special thanks to Trace for being my editor on this story. His suggestions has made this a much better story for me, and hopefully for you, the reader. Chapter 1 – The Diary Allen and Amanda had been married over ten years when Allen found her diary. Their marriage was good, but it had lost the energy that had defined their first two years. They had sett...
AUTHOR'S NOTE: These chapters are written to be read in sequence, to fully understand and enjoy the story -- RUSTY * Chapter 6 -- The Party Friday night Allen packed, kissed his wife goodbye and drove off to catch a plane. Amanda stood at the door, waving as Allen backed out of their driveway, but her thoughts had already turned to Saturday. Her outward a...
SUMMARY: This story in an original work, I wrote a story just to stretch my creative muscles. We all know aliens are ugly gray skinny dudes without any sexuality at all. Don't we? WARNINGS: Contains transgender themes, Sci-Fi, explicit sex, mild violence, bad words, and virtually no plot. It has only the strange things that dribble from my head. If you are...
elle sais mettre en valeur dans ses leggings (que je sais savourer quand elle ce baisse pour ramasser quelque chose ...) qu'elle porte tout le temps au travail, elle porte le plus souvent un t-shirt assez moulant un leggings et une chemisier par dessus son haut. C'est une femme assez attirante, souriante et joyeuse de vivre, de ce que je sais a en discuter a...